Good attempt at showing people some history.
It was a good attmept, sadly neither part was perfection. The animation was not the best? And your lesson about Juno beach was not descriptive nor did it have any actual facts. Good Effort.
Good attempt at showing people some history.
It was a good attmept, sadly neither part was perfection. The animation was not the best? And your lesson about Juno beach was not descriptive nor did it have any actual facts. Good Effort.
Haha, I'm gonna finish this soon, and hopefully everyone will be educated ^^
Ok heres my Constructive Critisim.
No actual drawings, boring font boring colours (black and white A+ for originality) Shitty music if you even want to call it that. No interactivity it needed a "play" button and a "kill myself" button. Humor 1-because its funny how pissed off you are when you need to realize what newgrounds really is, I have no flash submissions but i take it in school so i know how difficult it is, and i can see how easy yours was. Overall 0 for wasting my time when i could have been watching a flash from the guy below me who is experienced and has some good work.
Go deal with your "real life issues"
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Wasting your time? No one is forcing you to watch this.
Good animation nice flow, decent voices.
However, i did find the humor to be a little bland? I didnt laugh or anything during this movie, however the good animation did keep me watching. My suggestion is either work on your writing, or focus on animation and animate other peoples scripts.
-overall good job.
Thanks. The only reason the humor was... uh... bland, was because I didn't have Spare Orange to help write it at the time.
So, I have a joke planned for the next one. It's all good ^_^
Not bad animation, but not enough humor to back up
It was good, the shots were delivered nice, the characters were drawn decently, i just didn't find it too funny. THe voices were a bit off and could use some work but definately off to the right start, look forward to improved vids in the future!
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THIS IS THE BEST!
I've seen your stuff ever since episode 1 in season one, and man you guys have gone so far, adn this is the best ive ever seen. Keep it up.
Nice short little flick with effective sounds.
This movie cought my attention with the Duke Nukem intro scene. Not only was this entertaining it held a nice feel to it when the Black hawk Down music kiked in and the robot at the end was nicely done. Would you ever consiter animationg for Devil Head Productions? if so contact me.
Thanks for the review!
it was pretty good
Nice movie, we alll have had that happen to us in one online gam or another.
I share your feeling :)
i like me!
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